During the first few weeks of quarter two, my G.T. class worked on a Visual Poem project. My visual poem was about emotion and was titled "Bittersweet Irony." It basically describes emotions using metaphors. The visuals describe all the metaphoric emotions I use.
The effects I used were mostly soft and unnoticeable. For one part of my poem there's two lines that say "Light does not always equate good," and "Darkness does not always equate evil," so I made the clips dark or light corresponding to what that line said to get a better understanding of the statement. I used all cross-dissolve transitions so they would go pretty much unnoticed and so the mood would be set neutral.
I am semi-satisfied with result of my visual poem. I didn't realize that we had to have special effects, text, and music throughout the whole video until the due date and I already had some editing to do. I would improve it by adding less upbeat music because the poem is supposed to have a neutral feeling. I would also add more effects that apply to the poem. I couldn't find a way to add effects and discoloration, etc, to make it seem relevant.
Compliments:The music fit with the poem
ReplyDeleteCriticism:Some of the b-roll was dark
Compliments:The b-roll fit the poem
great use of editing tools. didnt fit of of the clips to full screen. Great closing line
ReplyDeleteI liked the b-roll I got but I think I shouldve used more effects and cropped some shots better. I liked the music I used.
ReplyDeleteThe words and effects you used set the mood, at least for me.
ReplyDeleteThe music was a little too loud at some points.
I liked the overall video, really good.
nice audio
ReplyDeletegood b-roll
nice music choice
great music and b roll you should fix the part where you can see the back
ReplyDeleteWow your poem is super descriptive
ReplyDeleteThere could have been softer music
And you got really nice shots
I really liked your poem, it was really well said. in some parts the music sort of drowns your voice. I really liked the part where you turned the camera to the grass and then it went to the poem.
ReplyDeleteThe words appearing as you spoke were cool, and creative.
ReplyDeleteThe music was a little too loud.
The Poem was very creative,and was awesome
Very nice transition to the piano! Cool!
ReplyDeleteI think it needed just a tad more of effects.
The music matched really well with the poem, very well done!
Your poem was really symbolic and I liked your poems meaning
ReplyDeleteYour music choice might not have been the best at first the mood was kind of mysterious but then with the addition of music it kind of changed.
Other than that your poem visuals were awesome and I loved the words and meaning!
Poem was read nicely. could have turned down the music a bit. Good b-roll.
ReplyDeleteI like how your voice was strong and the lyrics were very deep.
ReplyDeleteI don't really have any comments that would help you improve.
I like your over all poem. Great job!
Compliment: Your poem was really really good and you recited it really well.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you could've evened out your audio slightly
Compliment: The B-Roll matched up all the time and it was really creative.
Love you poem, very creative
ReplyDeleteBlurry on one shot but that is fine
I just LOVE IT!!!!
Your visual poem was great
ReplyDeleteYou could have made you audio a little louder when you played the music
Great visual poem
Visuals were very pleasing to the eye.
ReplyDeleteNo critque
Voice over was recorded with felling.
I loved it The music matched so well.
ReplyDeleteThere is nothing wrong with it.
Very good B-Roll!
Great poem I love the idea. Could have lowered the music a little. but great visuals its amazing.
ReplyDeleteCompliment: I loved the way you recited your poem.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you couldve evened the audio a little.
Compliment: I loved your visuals and how you described everything in the poem.
I love your B-Roll, especially the part when it goes in to the grass and then in to a piano.
ReplyDeleteIn one of your shots you could see the behind the B-Roll .
Your audio was great and the lyrics really told a story.
I like the ken burns effect in the beginning.
ReplyDeleteThe b-roll was dark in one shot.
There were lots of intresting shots.