My Visual Poem


During the first few weeks of quarter two, my G.T. class worked on a Visual Poem project. My visual poem was about emotion and was titled "Bittersweet Irony." It basically describes emotions using metaphors. The visuals describe all the metaphoric emotions I use.

The effects I used were mostly soft and unnoticeable. For one part of my poem there's two lines that say "Light does not always equate good," and "Darkness does not always equate evil," so I made the clips dark or light corresponding to what that line said to get a better understanding of the statement. I used all cross-dissolve transitions so they would go pretty much unnoticed and so the mood would be set neutral.

I am semi-satisfied with result of my visual poem. I didn't realize that we had to have special effects, text, and music throughout the whole video until the due date and I already had some editing to do. I would improve it by adding less upbeat music because the poem is supposed to have a neutral feeling. I would also add more effects that apply to the poem. I couldn't find a way to add effects and discoloration, etc, to make it seem relevant.

22 comments:

  1. Compliments:The music fit with the poem
    Criticism:Some of the b-roll was dark
    Compliments:The b-roll fit the poem

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  2. great use of editing tools. didnt fit of of the clips to full screen. Great closing line

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  3. I liked the b-roll I got but I think I shouldve used more effects and cropped some shots better. I liked the music I used.

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  4. The words and effects you used set the mood, at least for me.
    The music was a little too loud at some points.
    I liked the overall video, really good.

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  5. nice audio
    good b-roll
    nice music choice

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  6. great music and b roll you should fix the part where you can see the back

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  7. Wow your poem is super descriptive
    There could have been softer music
    And you got really nice shots

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  8. I really liked your poem, it was really well said. in some parts the music sort of drowns your voice. I really liked the part where you turned the camera to the grass and then it went to the poem.

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  9. The words appearing as you spoke were cool, and creative.
    The music was a little too loud.
    The Poem was very creative,and was awesome

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  10. Very nice transition to the piano! Cool!
    I think it needed just a tad more of effects.
    The music matched really well with the poem, very well done!

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  11. Your poem was really symbolic and I liked your poems meaning
    Your music choice might not have been the best at first the mood was kind of mysterious but then with the addition of music it kind of changed.
    Other than that your poem visuals were awesome and I loved the words and meaning!

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  12. Poem was read nicely. could have turned down the music a bit. Good b-roll.

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  13. I like how your voice was strong and the lyrics were very deep.
    I don't really have any comments that would help you improve.
    I like your over all poem. Great job!

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  14. Compliment: Your poem was really really good and you recited it really well.
    Criticism: I think you could've evened out your audio slightly
    Compliment: The B-Roll matched up all the time and it was really creative.

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  15. Love you poem, very creative
    Blurry on one shot but that is fine
    I just LOVE IT!!!!

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  16. Your visual poem was great
    You could have made you audio a little louder when you played the music
    Great visual poem

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  17. Visuals were very pleasing to the eye.
    No critque
    Voice over was recorded with felling.

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  18. I loved it The music matched so well.
    There is nothing wrong with it.
    Very good B-Roll!

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  19. Great poem I love the idea. Could have lowered the music a little. but great visuals its amazing.

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  20. Compliment: I loved the way you recited your poem.
    Criticism: I think you couldve evened the audio a little.
    Compliment: I loved your visuals and how you described everything in the poem.

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  21. I love your B-Roll, especially the part when it goes in to the grass and then in to a piano.
    In one of your shots you could see the behind the B-Roll .
    Your audio was great and the lyrics really told a story.

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  22. I like the ken burns effect in the beginning.
    The b-roll was dark in one shot.
    There were lots of intresting shots.

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